![]() ![]() I wanted more than anything to love Torina's daughter as Torina was a staple inspiration in my teenage years, but Sara was just lackluster. Like when a character catches everyone up to speed, "So Jasper told them everything that happened, when he was finished he grabbed a piece of bread." (I made that line up, but you get the point.)Įach character had so much potential, but ultimately most of them ended up falling flat. I feel like you cheat a lot with this book for the sake of ease for you. Wtf? Whyyyy? You could have revealed what happened through a less obvious conveyor Hanley. ![]() Prime example is Evan, he has one half a paragraph POV when he is going to the bathroom in the middle of the night. Or they were an altogether random character. It especially threw me off when we randomly enter the POV of someone who never had a POV throughout the book until it was convenient to the plot. When you are just beginning to get in the groove of one character's voice you are tossed into another's. POV's change so often that continuity becomes an issue. ![]() ![]() The character development was utter bollocks to be quite honest. As much as I dearly dearly dearly love Victoria Hanley I just couldn't with this book. ![]()
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